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The Room

       She enjoyed the way the smoke drifted, piled up against the miniature gray diamonds of the window screen until finally it was sucked through by the night breeze. The old white couch sagged beneath her and the moonlight lit her wandering hand. All along the block, windows were open, capitulating to the sluggish waves of heat. Practicing students at the Manhattan School of Music warred with someone‘s boom box in the building across the street. The couch was in the corner of the room, shoved up under two large windows that faced onto Claremont Ave from the bottom floor of Columbia grad student housing. The only other furniture was a mattress against the opposite wall and a low table, littered with cigarette packs, loose change, lipsticks, matches, and incense. She attempted to toss her lighter on the table and missed, sending it clattering to the wood floor. Turning, she peered through the smoke at the bed on the floor; he still slept.        

        When his hand brushed against the floor and twitched, she turned away. There was a cat below the window, a sleek gray cat on his haunches steadily eyeing her. She rearranged herself into the cat’s pose, felt her tail switching behind her as her back lengthened and her eyes narrowed. They remained stilly, each on their own side of the metal screen. A low purr began in her throat and was answered outside. Her nipples were tight, exposed to the night air, but she did not move to cover herself; she did not seem to feel the hairs rising along her body.

       The phone rang, shrilly. The cat left, continuing to look back at the window until he disappeared under a car. When she turned round the man’s eyes were open and he looked at her. She stopped being a cat and was a girl. Without speaking she crawled to him across the cool floor. He watched her crawl and let her kiss him. She drank out of his glass and they looked at each other. It felt then that they had both waited too long to speak, it was awkward and perhaps they would never exchange words again. Silence coated the room.

 

The Visitor

        The sirens woke her. She stayed in bed, looking at the lovely molding that wandered around the ceiling, stopped where somebody had ripped out a wall and picked up around the corner, sliding into the top of a door and ending.

       She remembered siren sounds and moved from the bed. She leaned out her window in her sloppy chemise, lazily pulling straps back into place. New York City's finest was so close to the ground floor window, she wondered if he had been watching her sleep. When he opened his mouth Brooklyn filled the space between them.

       It was a kitchen fire near the top floor, but so many trucks had responded; she vaguely wondered if perhaps the man's apartment building was close to the stationhouse? The fireman was in the process of inviting her outside to inspect his truck when his gaze moved over her shoulder. She hadn’t heard the man enter the bedroom, but he stood with a butcher knife loosely held at his side. It was still the early days, when he rose first and made her breakfast, when she didn't work and slept half the morning away and all of the night.

       “What are you doing, my wild honey pie?” The man spoke to her but looked past her, out the window. The fireman was already backing towards his truck, weakly smiling and attempting to maintain his ingratiating sense.

 

The Meal

        She was docile at the table, watching him cook. The kitchen was New York small, with the table pressed between an old window and the counter. She could smoke cigarettes and exhale out the window, listening to the old radio and keeping track of who was buzzed into the building. She liked to guess which apartment had ordered from which place for dinner, even though she didn't know any of the other tenants, and was a visitor there, herself. They never ate out.

        He often made love to her against the wall in the hallway adjacent to the kitchen, so that he could watch the stove. She appreciated his meals as much for the aesthetic arrangement as the taste. He put his fingers in her and in the pan without regard; sometimes she imagined she could taste herself in the food.

 

On Broadway in the 90s

       He tried, in the middle of the street, to kiss her angry mouth. She pushed him off and ran into one of the Upper West Side super moms patrolling with a doublewide stroller. He said some futile words. Nobody noticed as he unabashedly attempted to placate her. They played to the busy street, the people shoving each other off the sidewalks or waiting for the Cross-town bus. It was late afternoon and the light was fading, setting the buildings aglow and sparkling in the drops of water sliding from pomegranates and tangerines.

       She stalked over to the fruit stand on 96th and grabbed the most expensive thing she saw. She took a voracious bite and tossed the rest at him. His reflexes betrayed him and he caught it, along with the next two she lobbed at him in the street. Her eyes were vindictive as she watched him sheepishly pay the vendor. She smoked at the curb and eyed him balefully. He came to her, still holding the exotic citruses, and before she could move away he caught her arm and began mashing the sour fruit against her mouth and nose, careful to keep it from her eyes but stinging her lip where he had bit her the night before. Her laughter broke her.

 

The Subway

       The car he chose for them was warm and not crowded. They rode silently and separately until she began burrowing between his arm and side. He relinquished, opening his arms and allowing her to nestle against him. He ran his fingers along her neck and behind her ear, scrunching her short hair between his fingers like fur. He sang from Urban Hymns as she relaxed into him. His voice was beautiful because he did not sing apologetically. The old woman across from them in the train, with her Zabar's shopping bags piled around her and her ancient lovely shawl, smiled at his lullaby voice and the girl’s nuzzling face on his chest.

        He looked out the window over her head and enjoyed the momentary reprieve from underground between 116th and 137th. Her leg was warm against his and her arm twitched in his lap. He continued to sing even as she slept, his voice floating in the subway car.

 

Author’s Bio: Maxine is a graduate of the creative writing program at University of California: San Diego. She managers Murder Ink Bookstore in New York City and lives in a fifth floor walkup with one delightful husband and one gimpy cat.